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The suggester said: This was made with ballpoint pen and watercolours....wow school project. phoenix. color by *Liedeke
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school project. phoenix. color

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the colored version of [link] ^^

I'm quite pleased about how this one turned out actually :'D

I use ballpoint pen and watercolors.

I'd like to know what you guys think so please leave a comment :3

you are allowed to use this but without profit and give me credit! ;p also, if possible, I'd like to know :)
Image size
1141x1633px 807.55 KB
Make
HP
Model
HP Scanjet djf300
Date Taken
Oct 8, 2010, 5:01:46 PM
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:star::star::star::star-half::star-empty: Overall
:star::star::star::star-half::star-empty: Vision
:star::star::star::star-half::star-empty: Originality
:star::star::star::star-half::star-empty: Technique
:star::star::star::star-half::star-empty: Impact

the two phoenix are excelent, the color combination looks very well, the way you draw and paint the feathers is great, i would not change nothing of them,but i think composition can be improved. changing how the two bodies are in touch, maybe a little more or maybe a little less, or changing the angles. Congratulations a nice job. If you look carefully to the negative spaces around the birds, you will notice what I am trying to say. I always recommend avoid the figures to touch in one point,like the down bird head touch the feathers of the upper bird