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I made this one during class, I wanted to make something fluffy and fantasy like (as always ^-^'..) I originally wanted to make one kind of pattern but I ended up with several patterns on one creature ^-^ I like how this turned out.

time: about 120 minutes
materials used: paper, ballpoint pen and a purple color pencil for the eyes.

please let me know what you like about it or what I can improve, or just a simple comment ;p
Image size
1000x850px 466.81 KB
Make
HP
Model
HP Scanjet djf300
Date Taken
Oct 5, 2009, 5:28:13 PM
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:star::star::star::star-empty::star-empty: Overall
:star::star::star::star-empty::star-empty: Vision
:star::star::star-half::star-empty::star-empty: Originality
:star::star::star::star-empty::star-empty: Technique
:star::star::star::star-half::star-empty: Impact

He is really cute, but I am always honest when an artist wants a critique. Here goes...,Your shading and detail work is good the only thing I think that needs improvement is that your darks need to be darker and lights need to be lighter. His face somewhat looks like its blending into the left wing, and that the left wing needs to be slightly shorter or the right wing slightly longer(the anatomy of the wings look a little off). The paw in the left somewhat blends into the wing as well. Overall, your animal (without the wings) the anatomy to me looks perfect and he's so CUTE! <img src="e.deviantart.net/emoticons/s/s…" width="15" height="15" alt=":)" title=":) (Smile)"/> Also I love the pattern in the fur! Hey If you could please critique my art as well! <img src="e.deviantart.net/emoticons/s/s…" width="15" height="15" alt=":)" title=":) (Smile)"/> Thanks <img src="e.deviantart.net/emoticons/s/s…" width="15" height="15" alt=":)" title=":) (Smile)"/>